Thanks Strat! But I think I may have goofed in the last panel. It is supposed to be showing a flashback of Nikki, since she was introduced to Terestai -and vice versa- through her dreams. But from Lunaroki’s comment, me thinks I may have made it appear that she is dozing off in present time, lulled to sleep by Flitter’s tale. I’ll see if I can change it over the weekend to make it more obvious it is part of Flitter’s story. Thanks! -TK
Flitter may not have known… but I should have! Thanks for pointing out the error. Fixed! -TK
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I guess story time is nap time.
Such warm vibrant depth in your art. Impressive work!
Thanks Strat! But I think I may have goofed in the last panel. It is supposed to be showing a flashback of Nikki, since she was introduced to Terestai -and vice versa- through her dreams. But from Lunaroki’s comment, me thinks I may have made it appear that she is dozing off in present time, lulled to sleep by Flitter’s tale. I’ll see if I can change it over the weekend to make it more obvious it is part of Flitter’s story. Thanks! -TK
I got it TKD
Just to be on the safe side, I changed the panel… hopefully it will be less confusing.
I wouldn’t necessarily expect Flitter to know this, but “me” is the grammatically appropriate pronoun at the end there, rather than “I”.
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Flitter may not have known… but I should have! Thanks for pointing out the error. Fixed! -TK